While I understand that you believe the majority of the problems in Texas is the result of a poorly written constitution there is a definitive lack of supporting facts for your argument in your article, a need for changes. It appears to me that you felt like insulting the State and the people in it rather than providing ways to motivate people to empathize with your belief that the constitution must be streamlined and updated for our times.
I do agree that there are flaws in the Texas Constitution, but can not agree with your choice of approach to the topic. If I were a Texan I would likely have stopped listening to your statement that there are flaws in the Constitution and would have focused solely on the insults that you chose to fling instead.
It is highly advisable to stay way from name calling and all forms of insults in general when trying to persuade people of your position whether it be on the constitution or what movie to see tonight. One of my favorite Southern sayings seems to fit well here. You catch more flies with honey than vinegar.
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